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Wishin' by ~Ledin-Wind:iconLedin-Wind:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Spoken Word


Oh girl I wish I can be with you.
To be huddled oh so ever close with you.
To lay close to your body at nights to whisper.
“...I Love You…”

To stay at your bedside at night to wipe your tears that comes from you.
Also in my head thinking about you.
About all of the things that I want to do with and to you.

But as I realize this can never again be true, between me and you.
As I look from this place far above, these are the words I want you to keep inside your heart:

I Miss You
I Love You
I forgive You…
©2007-2009 ~Ledin-Wind
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Author's Comments

My first poem that I actually kept...

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~Shadow-Blue-Foxx Mar 11, 2007, 2:38:29 PM
Oh God....that's deep. ): I feel that way about my ex, but I know he'll never take me back, so I tried moving on, and somehow became a bisexual in the process. xD So, now I'm single and am trying to enjoy it. xP

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98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

I believe in Jesus Christ, my savior. If you do, too, and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this into your signature.
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~Ledin-Wind Mar 11, 2007, 5:49:02 PM
Hehehe *Smiles* Um...thanks for being supportive? <.< ..... >.>?

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How about you take a look at my :gallery: and :+fav: something?
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~Shadow-Blue-Foxx Mar 11, 2007, 5:51:54 PM
lol. xD sorry.

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98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.

I believe in Jesus Christ, my savior. If you do, too, and aren't scared to admit it, then copy and paste this into your signature.
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~Ledin-Wind Mar 11, 2007, 5:52:46 PM
That's okay.

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How about you take a look at my :gallery: and :+fav: something?
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~sarah12 May 28, 2007, 3:32:36 PM
wow... thats.. wow. i mean.. i like poetry... but sometimes dont really get into it, but this is really good ^^ i would never be able to write stuff like this..

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When the rich start war, its the poor that die.

98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
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~Ledin-Wind May 29, 2007, 1:07:50 PM
*Smiles and hugs* Thank you. I only write stuff like this when I'm depressed or something like that. <.<... I think depression is my mojo...

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How about you take a look at my :gallery: and :+fav: something?
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~sarah12 May 30, 2007, 2:01:58 AM
O_o awww... dont be depressed.. :hug: write stuff when your happy as well, depression isnt good.. :petting:

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When the rich start war, its the poor that die.

98% of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your signature.
:iconledin-wind:
~Ledin-Wind May 30, 2007, 1:15:48 PM
*Nods* I know, it's odd. But *shrugs* thats me...v.v;

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How about you take a look at my :gallery: and :+fav: something?
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~Fallen-Moonlight Feb 4, 2008, 7:55:27 AM
*squeals happily, glomping you into the abyss* Damien, It's Rachel, we all miss yew!!!!!!!!!! In the words of Brittoni this poem is really pretty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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"Get screwed before life screws you"
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